"Hit Me Baby One More Time..."
I have another story at Another Realm. It's called "Blind Date with a Mad Scientist." It's a comedy.
Please go there and take a look. Leave me some comments on what you think. I got blasted for "Passover" not being funny so I wrote this to see if I should even bother.
What do you think?
posted by Inner Prop at 3:43 PM
8 Comments:
Very well written. However, you lost me on some of the obscure references. I chuckled at the cleverness that wasn't out of reach!
Nicely done, but I think you need help...
Prop, I think your calling must be in comedy. That was hilarious! I loved it! To be honest, while I thought your previous submission was well-written, I just didn't think it was very scary. But you've got funny nailed.
And PS - Not to insult anonymous, but I just can't figure out what "obscure references" he/she was referring to. Van de Graff generator, possibly? It all seemed pretty easily understandable to me....
Thank you Anon and Tempus!
MJ, help because of the story or because of the repeated Britany references?
Prop - the Britany ones. The story was very good, I agree with Tempus. More please.
That was very funny Inner Prop! Woot!
That was great! I must admit I liked the Passover one better, but considering I'm a religion nut, that's to be expected.
Thank you Muslihoon, I believe that is the first entirely positive response I have recieved for "Passover."
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