Monday, February 27, 2006

"Hit Me Baby One More Time..."

I have another story at Another Realm. It's called "Blind Date with a Mad Scientist." It's a comedy.

Please go there and take a look. Leave me some comments on what you think. I got blasted for "Passover" not being funny so I wrote this to see if I should even bother.

What do you think?


Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very well written. However, you lost me on some of the obscure references. I chuckled at the cleverness that wasn't out of reach!

6:48 AM  
Blogger Major John said...

Nicely done, but I think you need help...

12:13 PM  
Blogger tempus42 said...

Prop, I think your calling must be in comedy. That was hilarious! I loved it! To be honest, while I thought your previous submission was well-written, I just didn't think it was very scary. But you've got funny nailed.

And PS - Not to insult anonymous, but I just can't figure out what "obscure references" he/she was referring to. Van de Graff generator, possibly? It all seemed pretty easily understandable to me....

2:02 PM  
Blogger Inner Prop said...

Thank you Anon and Tempus!

MJ, help because of the story or because of the repeated Britany references?

4:01 PM  
Blogger Major John said...

Prop - the Britany ones. The story was very good, I agree with Tempus. More please.

8:17 PM  
Anonymous Shelleigh (aka Pie Shell) said...

That was very funny Inner Prop! Woot!

11:43 PM  
Blogger Muslihoon said...

That was great! I must admit I liked the Passover one better, but considering I'm a religion nut, that's to be expected.

9:14 PM  
Blogger Inner Prop said...

Thank you Muslihoon, I believe that is the first entirely positive response I have recieved for "Passover."

10:40 AM  

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